One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you think governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?

Every
country
has its own rules and regulations.
people
should know that overpopulation will increase
government
problems
. We will discuss
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overpopulation in
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,
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are many countries which are overpopulated because the major thing is that
people
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first
thing is to do family planning which is very important not only
their
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families but
also
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. There are many
problems
increase
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if the
country
is overcrowded
for example
, traffic
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,
houses
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problems
, jobless
people
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that
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problems
only happen when
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person
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don'
t
focus on their family planning
that is
why
first
notice that we should limit our family.
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,
Government
should take action and make some rules and laws about
this
matter. They have to build new houses so that
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problem
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of living.
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free schools,
free
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medical for poor
people
so that
people
can easily
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facilitated
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facilited
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.
country
make
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a law
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that
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ever
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family has only two kids. More than two kids are
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against
againist
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the law and that will
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as
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a crime. so
persons
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get afraid and they make always
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plan
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. In conclusion, Most
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people
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don'
t
understand that situation and they don'
t
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problem. Human beings don'
t
know they should take care of their family and
country
. Citizens
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responsible
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for all
this
. If
citizen
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don'
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t
think of their
country
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who will think
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Government
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cause.
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