Some people think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is a

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that I can observe from a person in my family who teaches at Kasetsart

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by teaching in the

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of Information and Communication Technologies-ICTs.

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year, he retired from teaching and the department announced the recruitment of a new teacher to replace

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still vacant by announcing the qualifications that must have completed

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at the doctoral degree level from abroad in order to save the budget of the

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that has to send a teacher to study from abroad. As time has passed, the department has not yet been able to obtain a new teacher that has all the qualifications announced. From the survey data, it was found that in Thailand, there were only 806 teachers who graduated in the

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of Information and Communication Technologies-ICTs from 2006-2014.

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, from 2015 to 2024, higher education institutions in Thailand required 3,081 teachers who graduated in

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(

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Jiaraphan Somsak Wongpanyathaworn Apichai Pantasen, 2020).

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still has a

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with the number of instructors that must be increased in order to match the demand in

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in the future. I know

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because the shortage of instructors in

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has an impact on the number of graduates at the bachelor’s, master’s, and doctoral degrees, and

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the amount of research at the doctoral level.

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is significant because decreasing the amount of research produced by professors at the

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has an impact on the capability of ranking research of institutions in Thailand. According to data in 2017 from SCImago Institutions Ranking (SIR), Kasetsart

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was ranked 406, but in 2020 Kasetsart

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was ranked 412 ().

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

289 words

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Some people think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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