Some people think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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This
problem
is a
problem
that I can observe from a person in my family who teaches at Kasetsart
university
by teaching in the
field
of Information and Communication Technologies-ICTs.
Last
year, he retired from teaching and the department announced the recruitment of a new teacher to replace
this
position
that is
still vacant by announcing the qualifications that must have completed
this
field
at the doctoral degree level from abroad in order to save the budget of the
university
that has to send a teacher to study from abroad. As time has passed, the department has not yet been able to obtain a new teacher that has all the qualifications announced. From the survey data, it was found that in Thailand, there were only 806 teachers who graduated in the
field
of Information and Communication Technologies-ICTs from 2006-2014.
However
, from 2015 to 2024, higher education institutions in Thailand required 3,081 teachers who graduated in
this
field
(
wittaya
Correct your spelling
witty
Jiaraphan Somsak Wongpanyathaworn Apichai Pantasen, 2020).
Therefore
, it can be observed that
this
field
still has a
problem
with the number of instructors that must be increased in order to match the demand in
this
field
in the future. I know
this
is a
problem
because the shortage of instructors in
this
field
has an impact on the number of graduates at the bachelor’s, master’s, and doctoral degrees, and
also
the amount of research at the doctoral level.
This
problem
is significant because decreasing the amount of research produced by professors at the
university
has an impact on the capability of ranking research of institutions in Thailand. According to data in 2017 from SCImago Institutions Ranking (SIR), Kasetsart
university
was ranked 406, but in 2020 Kasetsart
university
was ranked 412 ().
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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