There is a problem with the changing room in your gym. You reported it several times, but it was not resolved. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter • Describe the problem. • Explain what the gym’s response was when you reported the problem. • Say what you would like the manager to do about the problem. Write at least 200 words to express your ideas clearly by using various structures and vocabularies.

Dear Manager, I’m writing

this

letter because I have an important

problem

with changing

room

.

Firstly

, lots of

wardrobe’s

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wardrobe

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keys

lost

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are lost

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so it is difficult to find

suitable

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a suitable

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wardrobe and because of

this

problem

, I

always be

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will always be

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late so, I can’t start sports at the same time as the sports team.

Secondly

, changing

room’s

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the room’s

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ventilation is defective. Because of the ventilation

problem

, the air in the changing

room

smells disgusting and it is

also

very difficult to breathe as you can imagine. A month ago, I have reported

this

issue with an email to Laura, the gym executive. And I

also

filed a detailed face-to-face complaint. Though a technician visited twice and the

room

was temporarily shut for a few hours, the

problem

about

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the ventilation remained unsolved.

Moreover

, no one took any action regarding the lost

wardrobe’s

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wardrobe

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keys. Please, talk

these

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about these

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problems with your team immediately

especially

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,especially

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both technicians and

customer’s

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customer

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executive. You should do something about the changing

room

, if you don’t, you may lose many customers, including me. Sincerely,