There is a problem with the changing room in your gym. You reported it several times, but it was not resolved. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter • Describe the problem. • Explain what the gym’s response was when you reported the problem. • Say what you would like the manager to do about the problem. Write at least 200 words to express your ideas clearly by using various structures and vocabularies.
Dear Manager,
I’m writing
this
letter because I have an important problem
with changing room
. Firstly
, lots of wardrobe’s
keys Change noun form
wardrobe
lost
so it is difficult to find Add a missing verb
are lost
suitable
wardrobe and because of Add an article
a suitable
this
problem
, I always be
late so, I can’t start sports at the same time as the sports team. Change the verb form
will always be
always am
Secondly
, changing room’s
ventilation is defective. Because of the ventilation Correct article usage
the room’s
problem
, the air in the changing room
smells disgusting and it is also
very difficult to breathe as you can imagine.
A month ago, I have reported this
issue with an email to Laura, the gym executive. And I also
filed a detailed face-to-face complaint. Though a technician visited twice and the room
was temporarily shut for a few hours, the problem
about
the ventilation remained unsolved. Change preposition
with
Moreover
, no one took any action regarding the lost wardrobe’s
keys.
Please, talk Change noun form
wardrobe
these
problems with your team immediately Change preposition
about these
especially
both technicians and Add the comma(s)
,especially
customer’s
executive. You should do something about the changing Change noun form
customer
room
, if you don’t, you may lose many customers, including me.
Sincerely,Submitted by Duyaniklar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite