“You want to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell him/her about your business explain why you think it is a good idea and ask him/her for some help or advice”

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Dear John, I hope my letter finds you in

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good health. I want to share some news with you about my new idea for opening a business. As you know, I have been planning to open a restaurant in my hometown for the

last

2 years and now, I have

finally

decided to open it in the next month. I think

this

is the best time to open it as you know wedding season is coming so, I am sure people will be looking for new caterers and dishes.

Therefore

, I think

this

would be a plus point in our business sales. I have decided to open one counter for now

that is

, Biryani, and you know that in the Ferozepur area there is no similar outlet before. I would like you to give me some suggestions if you have any related to dine-in. I want people to sit there and enjoy the food. So, if you can let me know any particular type of decor which is being used these days, that would be great. All the best. Looking forward to seeing you. Regards, Shikha

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Ensure to provide more detailed explanation on why you think this business idea is a good one.

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Organize your ideas into separate paragraphs for better clarity and coherence.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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