Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, a large amount of advertising is aimed at scion and some people feel that it should be banned.

While

advertising can have several negative impacts on

children

, I believe it should not be completely banned. 

To begin

, commercials aimed at her can have a detrimental impact, particularly on the relationship between parents and their heirs. Many offspring are easily manipulated to want things they see in advertisements, and

this

may cause conflicts between parents and

children

if parents deny their

children

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something they want.

In addition

, advertising targeted at

children

can have negative effects on their health, as many fast food and junk food companies these days direct their marketing strategies toward

children

, making their products appear to be healthy and appealing. Unfortunately, most

children

do not understand the concept of advertising and are easily persuaded to purchase these unhealthy foods, and

as a consequence

, can be at risk of many serious health issues,

such

as obesity and diabetes. 

On the other hand

, I feel that there should not be a ban on advertising aimed at

children

because advertising is one of the key aspects of a prosperous economy. If bans were to be placed on commercials, many companies would suffer from a decrease in sales and profits, which would eventually affect unemployment rates and the economy.

For example

, Coca-Cola provides thousands of employment opportunities in advertising throughout its branches across different regions around the world. If advertising

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banned, a large number of workers,

such

as marketers, may become unemployed, and

as a result

, the government will have to provide temporary financial support for those unemployed people.  In conclusion,

although

advertising aimed at heir may have certain negative impacts on family relationships and health, imposing a prohibition on it is unreasonable.