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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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It is true that there are many
place
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places
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 including
tourism
acting
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 as
a
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 important source of
financially
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gains
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. Sadly, if it is not under
the
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good control after it may cause
to
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lots of issues. Clearly,
this
 approach can have
a hugely positive effects
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hugely positive effects
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for
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  earnings,
however
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 it can
also
be backfire
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. The main
advantages
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advantage
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 of
tourism
is
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 that it can bring way more money which is essential for
government
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the government
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.
In other words
, with the help of foreign visitors
where
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  are coming all over the
world
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 we can earn benefits from them.
Moreover
,
increased
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an increased
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 number of
tourism
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tourist
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places
 can
also
 sustain the myriad number of unemployed people with  
a new jobs
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a new job
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.
For example
, my uncle has been
working
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tourism
 company since he
fired
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 from his former job. Because
of
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, at that time he was not able to find and
not
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 accepted to work whatever he want.
However
,
tourism
also
 has some major disadvantages like destruction the
natural
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of natural
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 touristic
places
 and
to pollute
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 the lands.
Firstly
, if tourists visit
to
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the
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tourism
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tourist
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places
 and as
result
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a result
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 of
this things
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this thing
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 they may damage the natural
places
 of
tourism
.
Secondly
, after visitors came to
touristic
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tourist
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places
 and
then
 they might throw away the trashes, after that
this
 leads to the  pollution of
lands
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land
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. To conclude, though there are some disadvantages of
tourism
,
but
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it has an extremely positive impact on
county’s
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the county’s
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 economy and
provide
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 a large number of new jobs for unemployed people. I believe that these benefits of
tourism
 outweigh its drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • hospitality industry
  • tourist influx
  • cultural commodification
  • ecological footprint
  • economic diversification
  • carrying capacity
  • cultural sensitivity
  • destination marketing
  • travel advisories
  • visitor management
  • impact assessment
  • tourism revenues
  • authentic experience
  • visitor satisfaction
  • conservation efforts
  • seasonal fluctuation
  • social sustainability
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