A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

It is true that there are many

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including

tourism

acting

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as

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important source of

financially

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gains

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. Sadly, if it is not under

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good control after it may cause

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lots of issues. Clearly,

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approach can have

a hugely positive effects

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for

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 earnings,

however

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it can

also

be backfire

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. The main

advantages

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of

tourism

is

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that it can bring way more money which is essential for

government

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.

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, with the help of foreign visitors

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 are coming all over the

world

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we can earn benefits from them.

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number of

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places

can

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sustain the myriad number of unemployed people with  

a new jobs

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.

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, my uncle has been

working

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tourism

company since he

fired

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from his former job. Because

of

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, at that time he was not able to find and

not

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accepted to work whatever he want.

However

,

tourism

also

has some major disadvantages like destruction the

natural

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of natural

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touristic

places

and

to pollute

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the lands.

Firstly

, if tourists visit

to

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the

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tourism

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places

and as

result

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of

this things

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they may damage the natural

places

of

tourism

.

Secondly

, after visitors came to

touristic

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places

and

then

they might throw away the trashes, after that

this

leads to the  pollution of

lands

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. To conclude, though there are some disadvantages of

tourism

,

but

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it has an extremely positive impact on

county’s

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the county’s

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economy and

provide

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a large number of new jobs for unemployed people. I believe that these benefits of

tourism

outweigh its drawbacks.