Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In the letter .give details of how you and your friends use the center .explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to your consideration about closing a sport and leisure centre.
I would like to inform you that I go to leisure facilities with my close friends.Most often than not we go there to do exercise.
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,we have a sports team that plays football at the stadium.After the football,we are more likely to play badminton because it is very interesting.
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let you know that the reason sport is crucial for the local community is that individuals have a chance to get rid of anxiety by playing group games or doing free time activities.It helps people to recharge their batteries.Linking Words
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,it is quite obvious that doing exercise is beneficial to keep fit and healthy.
I firmly believe that if the sports centres close.There will have an inevitable effect on people's physical health like obesity.It will Linking Words
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create a mental illness because inhabitants will not be able to relieve tension or relieve their job stress.
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concern as soon as possible
Yours faithfully
Malik MalikiLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite