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Some believe that technology, such as mobile phones, cell phones are destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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It's a no-brainer that technology has evolved over the years. Some say that technology is a blessing to mankind, but others disagree. In
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 have on our lives and analyze if they are destroying social interactions. To commence with, technologies have shrunk the distance between human beings.
People
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 use mobile
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 to talk to other
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 who are situated in different parts of the world.
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, with
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, one can connect to the social media world and get an understanding of different news around the world. There is no doubt that it has helped
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 to connect with others and share their ideas.
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, One can sit in Europe and talk to his family and friends in Asia with just a click of a button. How fascinating is that!
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, there is a strong belief that technologies have killed social interactions.
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 are now more comfortable sitting at home, watching movies rather than going out, and interacting with others.
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 led to a decline in physical health, which itself manifests the fact that there is a downfall in social interaction and mental health.
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, we have seen various reports where even though family sits together to eat dinner, they tend to use mobile devices and do not have any real conversations. To conclude, I do tend to agree with the fact that technologies have an adverse impact on social media.
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 have to develop an understanding of when to use mobile
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 and when not to in public places.
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