Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation.

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this
opinion.
This
problem is really popular in parts of the world. Nowadays, fast
foods
occur
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especially
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citys
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of
people
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that usually eat convenience
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and officers. I think the reason
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this
problem is their time. They live in a
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development
society so they have to work and study a lot
than
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different areas.
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, some
people
still
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select
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select
traditional
foods
because
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they
feel
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not good tates in fast
foods
.
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this
reason, some opinions explain that using traditional
foods
is their habit and they can not choose different
foods
. Fast
foods
are really popular and
food
preparation
of
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that too.
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, officers and students in university always choose
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their
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convenience
foods
. They feel convenient and
having
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time when they use
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fast food
.
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many
people
select fast
foods
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their meals
but
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some one
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want
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to
cook
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cook
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. Meals in
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really important
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a lot of
people
. They
also
think that
foods
are cooked by them that so
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clear
and café In my opinion, I think
people
should
cook
in
kitchen
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. Only
you
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are very busy you can use fast
food
. Because when you
cook
in your family will safe and
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delicious
than fast
food
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