Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation.

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There is a common belief that
convenience
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food
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productions are
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substituting
gradually traditional
foods
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and these methods. I firmly disagree with
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trend, as now will be discussed/ To commence, there always has
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demand for cooking old categories of
food
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. One of the major facts
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related
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demand
is that every
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year
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of people entering in plenty of traditional
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cooking classes. Since they all went to cook delicious meals not only for themselves but
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for their family and close relatives. In Viet Nam,
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, the
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of teenagers and adults approaching and learning how to cook traditional meals never
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clearer
to grow.
Convincenly
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,
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survey conducted by journalists
in
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globe
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displays that over 60% of people admitted to
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a traditional meal for their family if they have enough time.
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, lots of
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inhabitants
around the world believe that Despite having
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convenience
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,
convenience
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foods
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like
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hamburgers
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, KFC chicken and so on
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contains
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cntains
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contain
fats and loads of toxic
subtences
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substances
which are
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undoubtfully
not good for people’s
healthy
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.
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people frequently
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an
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effort
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effort
to enjoy traditional
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either at a restaurant or at home. For
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instance
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instance
, after their
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hours, more than
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half
helf
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half
of workers have lunch at traditional restaurants
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of
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food
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stores.
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, in 2022,
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numbers
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of restaurants have climbed dramatically due to the needs of
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customer
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customers
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.
As a result
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,
convenience
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foods
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can not replace traditional
foods
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. To recapitulate , again, I do disagree about the wrong
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awareness
about the replacement of traditional of the society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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