Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation.

In developed countries, convenience
food
will become popular and familiar. Some
people
think that they will replace traditional
foods
and traditional methods of
food
preparations
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.
However
, in my view, I think it will
common
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but I disagree it will replace traditional
foods
. Nowadays, fast
food
can be useful for
people
who are busy or work a long time in
office
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the office
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because they cannot prepare
foods
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food
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so they can go to the convenience
foods
store to buy
foods
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food
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.
Also
, many fast
food
outlets are good choices for couples to
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go
gor
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go
for a date.
Moreover
, some
people
do not like cooking because they have to prepare a lot of ingredients before cooking so they prefer eating prepared
foods
.
However
, these packed
foods
cannot replace traditional
foods
and
its
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their
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methods in each country, especially in Vietnam. When
worshing
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worshipping
ancestors, Vietnamese
people
have to cook their traditional
foods
and offer them
to
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alter to pay their respect.
Besides
,
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the same
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same
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some
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people
still
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like
llike
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like
cooking because they like the family atmosphere when everyone eats together.
Moreover
, many important celebrations
such
as lunar new year, wedding,
christmas
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,… have to cook traditional
foods
. In conclusion, convenience
foods
have common with everyone but
people
will have a lot of
disease
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diseases
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if they eat too many unhealthy
foods
.
Therefore
, I still choose traditional
foods
not only their attractiveness of colour and
tast
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taste
last
but
also
the healthy they are. No matter how fast
foods
developed. It still cannot replace traditional
foods
and its methods
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