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Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Physical fitness is as important as breathing in the air. It is often argued by some people that gymming is necessary to remain fit, whereas, other opine that there are other ways by which a
person
 can remain healthy
such
 as walking, climbing stairs and doing other household activities. I believe that a
person
 should do normal daily tasks to keep a
body
 in its shape. In
this
 essay, I shall discuss both points followed by my opinion. At the outset, some individuals think that enrolling
to
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 some health club is significant to remain healthy. Some people join
fitness
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a fitness
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club
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clubs
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 to keep their
body
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bodies
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 in shape by using different types of machines kept over there.
For instance
, I have seen many
filmstars
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 going to the gym as their daily routine, because their
body
 shape is crucial for their career.
Moreover
, the subscription to
such
 places is not free of cost, so once an individual
enrol
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 there, he will think before quitting. So eventually, going there daily becomes a part of life.
Therefore
, people prefer to join clubs to set their routines.
On the other hand
, in my opinion, a
person
 has to do
daily
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 walk,
running
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 or help his or her family members in doing household chores. In the past, our grandparents do not go to any gym, they do all their tasks on
own
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instead
 of using any machines. There were no automobiles earlier so they have to walk to go to another place.
For example
, My grandfather used to tell me how much he used to work when he was young, he died in his 90s and he had not a single health problem.
Hence
, gymming is not necessary for your
body
's fitness. To put it in a nutshell, gymming is an option for a
person
 where he or she can enrol themselves,
however
, doing a walk and other physical works are more important to keep your
body
 fit on a daily basis.
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