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the best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take driving test each year

#road #transport #goods #drivers #test #year
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economic prosperity in any country is having a strong transit system and
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 transportation plays a very important role in
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 field. In order to make
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 transport safer, different rules
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 as annual driving tests are needed.
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 given topic. In some ,countries drivers need to take a driving test each year, and
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 it is necessary, it is not perfect. Having a safer
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 transportation organization depend on several conditions.
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 of all, Roads should be built based on engineering principles and
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 to having enough
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 signs, they are
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 placed in appropriate locations.
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, Truck drivers must be checked for physical and health conditions periodically and driving tests should be taken every year but in my opinion ,these inspections are not required for car operators.
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, in Iran car chauffeurs need to apply once every five years.
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, following traffic rules plays an important role in
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 transport and should start from childhood so education and culturalization are
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 field. The safety and security of vehicles ,airbags, anti-break systems,forward collision warnings and etc,are other important items in the transport industry. For instance ,Mercedes-Benz company announces in one of its advertisements, you may make a mistake while driving, but we will save your life. To sum up,
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 an annual driving test is necessary, having a safe transportation system needs more steps. Following the rules ,
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 safety and culturalization complement each other.
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