What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to study abroad?

A huge number of youngsters are moving to foreign
countries
for higher
studies
. In
this
essay, we will discuss both pros and cons of migrating to foreign
countries
for study purposes.
To begin
with
benefits
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of foreign
education
, there are better job opportunities with international
education
. Developed
countries
have a great
education
structure. The students get highly
qualifie
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qualified
jobs after they are done with their
studies
which sometimes is not possible in their home country.
For instance
, In India, many degree holders are unemployed because of
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system. In foreign
countries
that is
not the case.
The another
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reason behind studying abroad is
good
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the good
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environment. In foreign
countries
, there are many free resources to help with assignments and exam preparations. In
countries
, like, India free
education
resources are not available. On the other side, there are some disadvantages as well of migrating to another country.
Language
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barrier is one of the negative
impact
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impacts
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on immigrants.
For example
, I know how to speak
english
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English
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but as
english
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English
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is not my mother tongue, so I have my own strong accent which is sometimes not clear to the
next
person. Another downside of living is
home sickness
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homesickness
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. People do get busy with work and
studies
, but in hard times we all need our family right beside us, with whom we can share
each
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apply
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and everything. When parents live
at
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far
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a far
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distance, it is hard for the children to tell their problems to the family. To
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conclude
conclue
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conclude
, leaving
country
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the country
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for
studies
brings some negative effects too with all the advantages of
bright
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a bright
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future .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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