Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student's level. Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learner and tell us very little about theri acutal ability. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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system in every country follows different rules but
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exam
. There are some
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is the way to evaluate
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a learner's
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knowledge
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other
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think that it's nothing but only giving pressure
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them.
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we can say that it is very important to
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a student's
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not get any
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knowledge
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from the course. By taking
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teachers
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can understand the level of
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of the learners.
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one
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loose
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his/her interest
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learning. Like when a student
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he/she may learn and get
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and that insists them
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learn well. Most importantly when a tutee have
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pressure to get
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result
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they
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concentrate
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lessons more as they know if they give more effort they will get more chance to do better results.
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some people
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that
exams
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very little feedback about their actual ability. In some
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it may
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that kids may get frightened of
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interests
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interest
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going to
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.
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only
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evaluating
through
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's
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knowledge
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but he/she may have much broad
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that. In
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conclusion
conclution
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conclusion
,
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everything
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has both good and bad sides as well
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opinion
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One
may assess by other aspects including
exams
.
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