Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that living without a car can decrease

air

pollution

effectively, while some may state that there are different methods that can reach the goal of reducing

air

pollution

in a more effective way. In my opinion, it is more helpful to fix on others means rather than

car-free

days in order to improve the

air

condition.

First

and foremost, I believe that the

pollution

made by industries

occupy

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most of the proportion of

air

pollution

. The factories' emissions somehow rapid the speed of the greenhouse effect, eventually decreasing the

air

condition. 

Moreover

, the quantity of factory emissions is far more than the exhaust gas emitted by automobiles. With a view to creating better

air

quality

, it is crucially important for the government to launch the emission regulation. A good case in point is that Taichung, which is known as the biggest national industrial park, has been reported as the city with the most worse

air

pollution

in our country. Compared with other cities in Taiwan, Taichung shows worse

air

quality

every year due to the rapid increasing factories development.

Therefore

, the local government started to launch the regulation on factories emission, which somehow directly slowed down the speed of

air

pollution

, improving the living

quality

.

On the other hand

, some may endorse that a

car-free

day

is a more helpful and effective way to improve the

air

quality

by simply changing their daily transportation habit.

For example

, there are many countries setting a

car-free

day

with the aim of increasing public awareness of the greenhouse effect. Private automobiles are banned on that

day

, which forced people to choose to take public transportation or walk.

This

kind of campaign not only decreased the exhaust gas generated by automobiles but

also

appealing people to take more public transportation rather than

private

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automobile. In conclusion, I am convinced that there are other methods

instead

of

car-free

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day

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days

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that can solve

air

pollution

more effectively.

This

is because of the fact that regulating industrial

emission

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emissions

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, which is the main factor of

air

pollution

, can decrease

air

pollution

more directly and effectively.