The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site.

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The map

illustrate

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illustrates

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how the Norbiton industrial

area

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look

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looks

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now and in the future. In

term

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of the industrial

area

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now, there are eight factories in the east of the town. Three of them are allocated in the west of the roundabout.

Other

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five

facories

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factories

are along the shorter stree. One of them is

at the end

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of the

stree

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street

. All of them are in the south of

river

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the river

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. With regard to Norbiton industrial

area

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after future development, all of the factories will be replaced by houses. There will be a small roundabout

appear

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in the

southest

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southeast

stree. Two roads will be

builded

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built

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. One of them

cross

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the river. The other one will be located

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the

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northwest of the biggest roundabout. There will have more facilities in Norbiton industrial

area

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such

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as shops, Medical

center

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. They are around the

biggst

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biggest

roundabout. There will build a school in the

eastest

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easiest

east

of the town.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
gentrification

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