The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site.
The map
illustrate
how the Norbiton industrial Change the verb form
illustrates
area
look
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looks
at
now and in the future.
In Change preposition
apply
term
of the industrial Fix the agreement mistake
terms
area
now, there are eight factories in the east of the town. Three of them are allocated in the west of the roundabout. Other
five Correct article usage
The other
facories
are along the shorter stree. One of them is Correct your spelling
factories
at the end
of the stree
. All of them are in the south of Correct your spelling
street
river
.
With regard to Norbiton industrial Add an article
the river
area
after future development, all of the factories will be replaced by houses. There will be a small roundabout appear
in the Wrong verb form
appearing
southest
stree. Two roads will be Correct your spelling
southeast
builded
. One of them Correct your spelling
built
cross
the river. The other one will be located Change the verb form
crosses
in
Change preposition
apply
the
northwest of the biggest roundabout. There will have more facilities in Norbiton industrial Correct article usage
apply
area
, such
as shops, Medical center
. They are around the Change the spelling
centre
biggst
roundabout. There will build a school in the Correct your spelling
biggest
eastest
of the town.Correct your spelling
easiest
east
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