The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People have different views about the question of how to make our roads safer.
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I agree with the idea that an annual driving test is necessary, I believe that
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can take other measures to boost
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safety
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.
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, it is important to ask
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to take driving tests every year as long as they do not cause
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accidents. It is
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essential to educate people way before they start driving and that can be done in schools or other extended driving
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programs.
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, television campaigns are used to show effective ways to be more careful
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driving.
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, local traffic controls can help
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pay more attention
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driving by adding signs on roads, speed bumps, and
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bends.
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, I believe that
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and local councils should consider strict punishments for careless and dangerous
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who increase
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accidents. There are various penalties for driving offences
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as fines or even prison sentences. These punishments would encourage them to drive more safely and be responsible for others’ lives and
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addition, speed cameras can help the police to identify lawbreaker
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to punish them.
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, the government should ban those who have alcohol drinking problems and tend to drive when they are drunk and risk other people's lives, and not let them get a driving license one more time in their lifetime.
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,
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I agree that a yearly driving test is an important measure to tackle
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safety
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issues, I believe that strict punishments are
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necessary.
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear overall structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Use cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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