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some languages spoken by very few people are losing their importance and may become extinct completely.it is a good or bad development? what are the reasons for this

Nowadays there are some
languages
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 that are vanishing because of variable reasons.
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 I think
this
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 is not a nice development, it is some kind of a natural process. In
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 issue will be addressed before reaching a conclusion.
Firstly
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, many
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 have their own way of conveying human things.
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, there are numerous phrases and idioms that have special meanings and can transfer the idea better than common and usual conversations.
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,
language
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 extinction
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 of an
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 loss sounds bad apparently.
Secondly
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, each
language
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 comes from a culture that has been developing since its creation. So by becoming extinct, there will be no signs of the culture available. The main reason for an
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 loss may be a decreasing number of people who speak that
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.
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, the level of difficulty of that
language
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 is not as
less
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effective as we think.
Additionally
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,
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also
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 fade away because the official spoken
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 is a different one so schools and books use another
language
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. So
that
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language
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 enters society and becomes more important than
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spoken
language
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.
For example
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, the spoken
languages
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 in the centre of Zagros are becoming used less than before by their own people. In conclusion, the extinction process of a
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 seems normal in case of any effort may be put on to save the
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. Personally, I think it is a bad development and there may be nothing to stop it.

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