Government around the world are spending billions in support of space programs.This will be better spent on research into improvements in human health. Do you agree or disagree?

Investment

of

money

by the government is mainly provided to improve the living of the people. Recently, there is a debate that political leaders should spend

money

on the

health

care system, rather than investing it in space programs.

This

essay agrees with the point that investing

money

in

health

facilities should be a priority. Countries are spending billions of amount on space to explore, and to make the country economically strong. Many scientists are getting sponsored for various successful projects as a part of a competition among the countries, the government wants to win the projects, increase its international relationships and build up a strong economy,

consequently

,

this

would make their population lives better in long run.

For example

, the country which sent its people successfully to NASA

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is now known as one of the most powerful places. For

this

reason, the political leaders spent billions of

money

as an

investment

in long-term goals.

Conversely

, the trending pandemic and non-communicable diseases are clear reasons to understand that

investment

in

health

is not an option but a need. Investing

money

in the

health

departments would enable scientists to explore and prepare the population for predicated diseases. ,

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this

will

also

help link other related departments to work on the immunity of people by introducing effective medicines.

For instance

, research showed, deaths due to COVID-19 in Pakistan, were 45% less from other countries, because of prior instructions and drugs, which were supplied to the citizen to boost their immunities.

Therefore

, the more

investment

done in the medical field, the lesser mortality rate will be observed. In conclusion, While, the amount invested in space would make the country politically strong and would

also

help humans in the longer run, the fact should not be ignored that human life is important among all other investments.