Memories are the best mirror of the past. Do you agree?

Throughout the ages,
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have been intrigued by the very idea of
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, how they work, where are they stored, and how they impact one’s life. As humanity marches forward in their endless search for knowledge, electronics strapped to them, and endless digital space, what role does
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play in our lives?   The first text points out how
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is a vital resource
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' possess and the lack of it, caused by new-age gadgets, can impact physical and mental mobility. The debate around electronics has always been a hotly contested topic, whether they carry a positive or negative impact,
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hard to disregard – information, which usually would be stored in
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, has been moved to phones, laptops, and other digital storage devices, and
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might impair the brain’s development. Surprisingly, they might not be that far off. According to scientists,
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improve their
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by actively engaging in certain data recollection,
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passively searching repeatedly online for the same information does not form neuropathways.
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more research needs to be done to come to a solid conclusion, the case presented is not unlikely.   The second text,
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not outright disagreeing with the first one, does raise the notion that
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should not be taken at face value – rather than being a form of informational and objective material, they are influenced by our imagination and are an aspect of our identity. An example of people having shown unreliability with
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is the infamous conspiracy theory
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 The Mandela Effect. At its very core, The Mandela Effect is a mass group of people misremembering information of a wide variety from images to historical events. And it is no wonder so many films that use an individual’s
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loss as a basis for the plot, usually have a horror facet to them. Who is a person without
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? Are
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, at their simplest, identical carbon copies and are
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the only difference?   Concluding
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are not objective, they are influenced by our imagination and
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have a limit to how much they can remember. But they cannot be replaced, because they are engrained to be a very personal experience that allows everyone to be an individual.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
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  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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