You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • thank your friend for the stay • describe where you left the envelope • ask him/her to return it to you by post

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Dear Alex, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I thank you for your warmest welcome and for letting me stay in your flat these past 3 days as it made

easy

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it easy

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for me to focus on my seminar.

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, I had a great

time

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spending it with you and enjoyed the food you served.

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, I left a large brown envelope containing some important documents I accumulated during the conference. I left it in the room you provided, if you have spare

time

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, could you look into it? It's under the black table where I usually do my research. If you have

time

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, can you send it to me via post? My address is 81 Minalin, Pampanga. I would be grateful if you could send it to me before Friday, as I need it for my presentation to our company

this

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upcoming weekend.

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, I will pay for the expenses

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sending

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them

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back to me. Thanks for your

time

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. Love, Ashi

Submitted by ashi on Wed Oct 05 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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