Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Age and
work
experience
are two determinant factors of
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and productivity of services provided. Some believe that the elderly
workers
should be replaced by the younger energetic generation, while others argue the
experience
of the senior employers should not be disregarded. In my opinion, I agree that
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should comprise mainly of youngsters, while retaining the experienced
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elderly
workers
in other posts,
such
as
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advisory
or supervisor posts.
To begin
with,
younger
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the younger
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generation should be recruited
to
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for
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industrial
work
over the older
workers
because of many reasons.
Firstly
, young
workers
have more physical stamina and
less
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likely to fall sick.
Therefore
, the average number of working hours they are able to offer
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much more than when they age. Youngers are enthusiastic and more committed.
This
stems from the fact they are new to the
work
environment, with fresh minds. And
also
has less family
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commitment
commitments
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commitment
and other family members older than them to support them. All
this
enable
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them to provide better service at
work
. The major downside of employing naive, fresh out of the school teenagers
are
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their lack of
experience
. There are bound to make mistakes and their ability to prevent accidents
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not
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as compared to
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years
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of
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the trained
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worker.
Although
,
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training can solve
this
issue with
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inexperience
experience
inwxperience
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experience
to some extent, it cannot be completely
aleviated
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alleviated
.
Thus
, the presence of
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an experience
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worker
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workers
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is essential. In conclusion,
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even though
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even though
the factories would
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immensely
benefit from the
entusiasm
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enthusiasm
and energy young recruiters bring, they have to retain some of the older
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workers
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to maintain a safe working environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • experienced
  • old workers
  • young
  • inexperienced
  • replace
  • industry
  • wise
  • argue
  • valuable
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • loss of expertise
  • lack
  • necessary
  • experience
  • maturity
  • diverse
  • workforce
  • mix
  • age groups
  • beneficial
  • focus
  • providing opportunities
  • continuous learning
  • development
  • balanced approach
  • smooth transition
  • maintain productivity
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