In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
contemporary era, public and private automobiles are the best way to communicate from one place to another. Linking Words
However
, in several regions, most individuals claim that it is important to spend huge amounts of money on building new Linking Words
railway
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line
for very fast Fix the agreement mistake
lines
trains
between cities. Others consensus that these should be spent on improving available public vehicles. Use synonyms
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essay tends to discuss both Linking Words
the
views and my opinion will be drawn before reaching Correct article usage
apply
to
a reasonable conclusion.
To begins with, it is intuitively obvious that the fastest way to travel from one city to another is Change preposition
apply
train
. The Change preposition
by train
first
and foremost reason to add new Linking Words
railway
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lines
is timing. Use synonyms
In other words
, by adding more Linking Words
railway
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lines
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their
will be less traffic for Replace the word
there
trains
, which helps Use synonyms
trains
to reach Use synonyms
its
destination early. Apart from that, Correct pronoun usage
their
pollution
will be in control. To Use synonyms
elobrate
more, if the facilities are improved in Correct your spelling
elaborate
celebrate
trains
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then
civilians will opt for Linking Words
this
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instead
of Linking Words
private
vehicle, which will create less air Add an article
a private
pollution
. Use synonyms
For example
, the US authorities spend ample amounts on Linking Words
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the railway
railway
, the Fix the agreement mistake
railways
pollution
is reduced by 20% Use synonyms
compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
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last
decade. Correct article usage
the last
In addition
, it is Linking Words
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cheaper
cheapper
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cheaper
compare
to private Wrong verb form
compared
gasolines
, which saves individuals money. Change the wording
gasoline
types of gasoline
gallons of gasoline
Therefore
, locals usually prefer Linking Words
trains
to travel from one city to another.
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On the other hand
, the remaining public transport Linking Words
also
plays an important role Linking Words
for
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in
traveling
. Change the spelling
travelling
Firstly
, the bureaucrats should reduce the use of gas and adopt Linking Words
for
eco-friendly vehicles like electric Change preposition
apply
bus
, which will be suitable for the environment. Fix the agreement mistake
buses
Secondly
, appropriate facilities should be ameliorated Linking Words
such
as air conditioner, Linking Words
convinent
seats and many more. Correct your spelling
convenient
Therefore
, I think the amounts should Linking Words
be spend
on Change the verb form
be spent
railway
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lines
rather than on existing public automobiles.
To sum up in the aforementioned paragraphs, though city buses and Use synonyms
many
other public Replace the quantifier
much
transport
should be improved, more Change to a plural noun
transports
railway
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lines
should Use synonyms
be add
to reduce Change the verb form
be added
pollution
and traffic Use synonyms
of
the countries.Change preposition
in
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