In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

contemporary era, public and private automobiles are the best way to communicate from one place to another.

However

, in several regions, most individuals claim that it is important to spend huge amounts of money on building new

railway

line

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for very fast

trains

between cities. Others consensus that these should be spent on improving available public vehicles.

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essay tends to discuss both

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views and my opinion will be drawn before reaching

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a reasonable conclusion. To begins with, it is intuitively obvious that the fastest way to travel from one city to another is

train

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. The

first

and foremost reason to add new

railway

lines

is timing.

In other words

, by adding more

railway

lines

their

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will be less traffic for

trains

, which helps

trains

to reach

its

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destination early. Apart from that,

pollution

will be in control. To

elobrate

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elaborate

celebrate

more, if the facilities are improved in

trains

then

civilians will opt for

this

instead

of

private

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vehicle, which will create less air

pollution

.

For example

, the US authorities spend ample amounts on

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railway

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, the

pollution

is reduced by 20%

compare

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to

last

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decade.

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, it is

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cheaper

cheapper

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compare

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to private

gasolines

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, which saves individuals money.

Therefore

, locals usually prefer

trains

to travel from one city to another.

On the other hand

, the remaining public transport

also

plays an important role

for

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traveling

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.

Firstly

, the bureaucrats should reduce the use of gas and adopt

for

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eco-friendly vehicles like electric

bus

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, which will be suitable for the environment.

Secondly

, appropriate facilities should be ameliorated

such

as air conditioner,

convinent

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convenient

seats and many more.

Therefore

, I think the amounts should

be spend

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on

railway

lines

rather than on existing public automobiles. To sum up in the aforementioned paragraphs, though city buses and

many

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other public

transport

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transports

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should be improved, more

railway

lines

should

be add

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to reduce

pollution

and traffic

of

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the countries.