some people say that the main enviromental problemu otiaf our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important enviromental problems, discuss both these views andgive your own opinion.
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I will explain why both views are important from my point of view.
On one hand, I believe that some major problems should be always mentioned when we talk about our surroundings , Add a comma
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, the emission of hazardous gases into the air and pollution of water sources is the reason for many bad changes like climate changes or global warming and the result of these issues is threatening not only human living but Linking Words
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would not be enough because preventing these things from extinction is an important case too. Many special Use synonyms
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, a kind of tiger in the north of my country is going to vanish because of the large number of hunters and the black market for their skin. Linking Words
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, like what happening around us, many wood traders cut tall trees in the jungle without planting or replacing any of those kinds of trees. Some of those Use synonyms
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are very old and are a rare type of their species.
All in all, I believe that, whereas the facts related to animal and Use synonyms
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