You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

#work #company #friend #jobs #job #news #addresses #___

Dear Mark, Greetings of the day! I hope

this

letter finds you well and in good health. The reason that I write

this

letter is to inform you that I have started work in a new

company

. I was working in shifts in my previous job and despite working long hours and during weekends, I had a feeling I was not given commensurate pay.

Hence

, I have switched to

this

new

company

which is a 5-minute drive from home. Each one of my colleagues is friendly and sociable to me.

This

role is challenging and gives me better industry exposure than the former

company

Moreover

, I feel satisfied and keen in working for

this

company

since it reflects well on my personality. In other news, my parents are coming to visit me

this

Christmas, so I would be delighted to host them. It would be great if you could join us for the festive season. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Thanks and Best Regards, John

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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