You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

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Dear Mark, Greetings of the day! I hope

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letter finds you well and in good health. The reason that I write

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letter is to inform you that I have started work in a new

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. I was working in shifts in my previous job and despite working long hours and during weekends, I had a feeling I was not given commensurate pay.

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, I have switched to

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new

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which is a 5-minute drive from home. Each one of my colleagues is friendly and sociable to me.

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role is challenging and gives me better industry exposure than the former

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, I feel satisfied and keen in working for

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company

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since it reflects well on my personality. In other news, my parents are coming to visit me

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Christmas, so I would be delighted to host them. It would be great if you could join us for the festive season. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Thanks and Best Regards, John

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

166 words

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