Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often considered that
people
achieve their goals or not, mainly a matter of Use synonyms
luck
or some beliefs. In my, inclination Use synonyms
luck
Use synonyms
do
not play a role Change the verb form
does
to gain
success. Change preposition
in gaining
Thus
I completely disagree with the statement which leads to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement and explaining Linking Words
further
, the first and foremost reason behind is that hard-working Linking Words
people
are found to achieve their respective goals without any hurdles. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they believe Linking Words
in
practising it would help them to attain their target in life. Change preposition
that
For instance
, college cliques of students tend to spend time in un useless activities because they have a mindset that god will help them out but when exam outcomes Linking Words
came
they realise what mistake they have Wrong verb form
come
done
in a course duration.
Probing ahead, Verb problem
made
Luck
has a 1% chance that the masses can reach their aims. Moving Use synonyms
further
, it is pertinent to mention that all successful Linking Words
people
have a clear mindset, Meanwhile, in the,beginning they work hard so they can be Use synonyms
a
successful Correct article usage
apply
people
. Use synonyms
For example
, APJ Abdul Kalam sir is a clear example of a Linking Words
people
. Nowadays, individuals Use synonyms
use to
follow him on each and every social site so they can Verb problem
apply
encourage
by him and follow his thoughts. Wrong verb form
be encouraged
In addition
to Linking Words
this
parents use to guide their adolescents to work hard, and practise more and more will help them to be Linking Words
a
successful Correct article usage
apply
people
.
To recapitulate, Use synonyms
according to
the argument one reaches the conclusion Linking Words
luck
will not help you out in life. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, you have to grind yourself to achieve success in life.Linking Words
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