Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Public vehicles should be fully subsidied by

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the government

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to promote the

the

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campaign of "save the earth". I hold the view of

government

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the government

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should provide free transportation to citizens from travelling

one

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place to another,

however

, many

of

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people

disagree with

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opinion. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides and give reasons to support my agreement.

Firstly

, mother earth would be beneficial if

people

are able to commute from one destination to another freely. In

this

case, purchasing a private car might not be

neccessary

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necessary

for many

people

, and it will reduce the air pollution which often

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by cars.

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, not only

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in moving

car

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cars

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on the road but

also

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minimal

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the

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rate of

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accident

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.

Secondly

, grass will go greener and water will become cleaner due to the

declining

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in air pollution.

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, I still remember when I was a kid

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when

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vehicles had not invented, the air

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used to be so clean and fress unlikely now our oxygen contains full of dust and chemical

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which we can't observe

it

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through

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bare eyes.

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, some

of

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people

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the people

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argue that public transport should not provide

complimentary

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.

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that, many organisations would be affected by

this

minor action from the

government

such

as vehicles manufacturer and petrol suppliers.

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, several industries would lose their job or business because of

this

implementation.

Besides

, it would increase the number of pessengers in

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a certain

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period

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periods

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of time and it would create

crowd

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that are unnecessary, which may cause

people

to get injured. In conclusion,

although

there are some reasonable arguments against whether

government

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should provide free transportation, there can be no doubt that the potential advantages of free transport far

more

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outweigh

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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. In

this

case, I

am strongly agree

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strongly agree

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that

government

should provide complimentary travel from one place to another.