Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading and writing skills are decreasing
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these days. Some
people
think it is because of
increasing
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use
of computers and mobile phones. I strongly agree with
this
opinion. Withing advanced technology, young
people
like to
use
laptop
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or
cellphone
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cellphones
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to deal with their jobs or communities.
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simple reason is that these devices are very
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.
For example
,
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, we can see lots of young
people
who on their way to work
use
their mobile phones to send
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messages
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massages
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messages
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or emails to the customs or chat with their friends.
In addition
, there
are
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huge information that
people
can research online through their computers or
cellphones
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.
However
, most of them only read the chapter or sentence
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they need
instead
of
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article. Thereby reading a book or whole article
become
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more difficult for them.
Moreover
, young
people
who
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in
this
world which
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of competition always feel tired and
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. In order to finish their job perfectly, sometimes they have to write lots of reports.
Therefore
, the best way is to
use
computer
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a computer
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and
other device
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to write letters, reports or emails with
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type of fond.
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is
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means that writing with
computer
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can avoid other
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misunderstand
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. As they don’t have enough time to practice their handwriting. And
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a computer
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computer
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computers
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to write documents can give
themselves
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more confidence. The disadvantage is their writing skills are declining. Even they would forget how to spell the word
what
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they want to write because they rely on
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the computer
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computer
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computers
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. In conclusion,
instead
of traditional reading and writing is a lifestyle in the future, especially for young
people
. I suggest that some technology
company
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should develop software to help
people
practice their handwriting.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • over-reliance
  • comprehension skills
  • digital content
  • sustained reading capabilities
  • texting and messaging apps
  • abbreviations
  • acronyms
  • emojis
  • formally and coherently
  • educational resources
  • scholarly articles
  • educational apps
  • enhance
  • digital platforms
  • blogs
  • social media posts
  • online forums
  • concise
  • impactful writing
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