Some people think that woman should take part in the military or the police force, but other oppose to this idea. Discuss both views give your own opinion and examples

Nowadays, every gender is able to get into the military

force

.

However

, the community has controversy about

this

idea. Some

people

have an opinion about

women

should not be soldiers. In my point of view, I assume that the reasons for both groups are equity and the female body. The military and the

police

force

are important to several countries. Everyone should be able to take part in the

group

. In many countries,

women

can get into the

police

force

.

For example

, in US,

women

, who want to join a

group

, need to take tests and do body checking before training. in Thailand, female

people

can join the

police

group

by taking an examination.

Thus

, the military

group

is important, every

people

can become one of them.

In contrast

, The anatomy of a female body is not worth becoming a soldier. According to research, female muscles and bones are weaker than male. Not only muscle and bone but

also

tolerance. Female heart rate is slower than male. When

women

take some training, their pulse rate would reach the threshold faster than men,

then

women

would be easily tired before men.

For example

, my friend joined the

police

force

for

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2 years, she went to an emergency room because she has a heart problem after hard punishment from the

police

school.

Thus

female anatomy is a problem for being the military

force

. In conclusion, some

people

believe the military

force

should recruit every gender, meanwhile, somebody disagrees because

women

have anatomical problems.

Thus

,

people

, who agree with

this

idea, think about equity. Alternatively,

people

, who disagree with an idea, are concerned about the anatomical woman. In my opinion, leaders of the soldier should design a program, which is appropriate for

women

.