Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?
Nowadays, animals are decreasing in our
surrounding’s
even some are on verge of extinction. The latest published data revealed that flora and fauna Change noun form
surrounding
deducted
to half in percentage in Add a missing verb
were deducted
last
five Correct article usage
the last
decade’s
. In my opinion, Change noun form
decades
wildlife
can be conserved by spreading awareness and through
avoiding pollution.
The main idea is to educate and aware community Change preposition
apply
regarding
Change preposition
of
importance
of Add an article
the importance
animal
populace which can be done by Correct article usage
the animal
government
through organising campaigns in favour of Add an article
the government
safety
and protection of Correct article usage
the safety
wildlife
in our environment. In my town, for instance
, authorities and local NGO’s
organise fairs and rallies to avoid poaching or killing wild creatures. Change noun form
NGOs
Community
should Add an article
The community
A community
also
volunteer for these types of approaches; otherwise
, animals and their habitats would not be saved. Thus
, educating people can become a crucial weapon as a wildlife
saviour.
Other
way is through restricting Change the wording
Another
water
and air pollution. However
, authorities are playing vital
role in it, but Individually people show carelessness. Add an article
a vital
Instead
of stopping pollutants, they are dumping huge piles of garbage and poisonous gases in rivers and Correct your spelling
freshwater
fresh
Correct your spelling
freshwater
water
sources, as a result
, natural reservoirs and air are getting polluted, that
directly Correct word choice
which
impacting
animals. Wrong verb form
impacts
Need
is to clean the Correct article usage
The need
water
and air through myriad
Add an article
the myriad
a myriad
of
plans, Change preposition
apply
for example
, water
purification refineries and planting new trees. Therefore
, cleanliness and plants can protect wildlife
.
In conclusion, both government and common nationalists are equally responsible to provide safety to these natural creatures by circumventing hunting and keeping environment
free from pollution.Add an article
the environment
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