You are not satisfied with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.

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Hello Thompson, I am Emmanuel Asiedu a premium member of your sports place. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your changing room which I visited recently. As you know, most of the people who visit your gym make use of the changing room but unfortunately, the toilet is leaking and the water heater is

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not working.

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, coming to your place is not worthwhile as the place irritates me. I really feel awful about

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problem as I believe

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will affect the reputation of your sports ground. I planned to cancel my yearly subscription as your changing area is in a deplorable state.

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, As winter is fast approaching, it will not be convenient for me to use your facility.

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, I thought it wise to suggest a few points that I think you can implement to fix these problems. I would suggest you replace the water closets and the water heater with a new one as the ones in your facility are in a bad condition.

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is not fixed immediately, it will affect your review and

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, affect your business. Thanks for your understanding and I know it won't be long before

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problem is resolved. Yours Faithfully, Emmanuel Asiedu

emmasiedu86Thu Oct 06 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

unsanitary
unpleasant
frustrating
substandard
unacceptable
disappointing
inconvenient
unhygienic
maintenance
cleaning
facilities
outdated
repair
shortage
lockers
benches
showers
functioning
staff
unhelpful
impolite
privacy partitions
ventilation
smell
lighting
inspections

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You are not satisfied with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.

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