You are not satisfied with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.

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Hello Thompson, I am Emmanuel Asiedu a premium member of your sports place. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your changing room which I visited recently. As you know, most of the people who visit your gym make use of the changing room but unfortunately, the toilet is leaking and the water heater is
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not working.
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of
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, coming to your place is not worthwhile as the place irritates me. I really feel awful about
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problem as I believe
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will affect the reputation of your sports ground. I planned to cancel my yearly subscription as your changing area is in a deplorable state.
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, As winter is fast approaching, it will not be convenient for me to use your facility.
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, I thought it wise to suggest a few points that I think you can implement to fix these problems. I would suggest you replace the water closets and the water heater with a new one as the ones in your facility are in a bad condition.
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, if
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is not fixed immediately, it will affect your review and
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, affect your business. Thanks for your understanding and I know it won't be long before
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problem is resolved. Yours Faithfully, Emmanuel Asiedu
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unsanitary
  • unpleasant
  • frustrating
  • substandard
  • unacceptable
  • disappointing
  • inconvenient
  • unhygienic
  • maintenance
  • cleaning
  • facilities
  • outdated
  • repair
  • shortage
  • lockers
  • benches
  • showers
  • functioning
  • staff
  • unhelpful
  • impolite
  • privacy partitions
  • ventilation
  • smell
  • lighting
  • inspections
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