Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are one of the ideal means for preserving art and culture. Several

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for allowing them to enter these places and to see various rare and historically important objects or paintings. Despite the fewer drawbacks of

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practice, its financial benefits seem to be promising. I,

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, feel it is reasonable to believe that the brighter sides of

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outshine the darker aspects. At the outset, the primary reason why it is meritorious is that only by keeping set prices for tickets, the

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who are running

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can earn an income. Since many of the objects inside the

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require continuous maintenance,

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authorities need a source of revenue. The main advantage of charging an entry fee is that it will prevent casual

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. Many

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simply see the

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as a meeting place and have no interest in the exhibits. They disturb genuine

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. If

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owners allow

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to stroll inside it for no cost it would actually lead them to get bankrupt as they run out of money.

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, the public will

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lose their chance to visit that

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. Apart from that, as

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tend to believe that only

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that charge for admission have something precious inside, charging is necessary to increase the number of

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. In spite of these, some drawbacks do exist.

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when charges are much higher

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hesitate to go to the

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and might consider doing other less expensive activities. Poor

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are indirectly denied an opportunity to visit the

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. If the

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charges nothing for

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’s entry into them, it would allow

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larger number of individuals from various financial backgrounds to enjoy the exhibits /

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say, having analysed the various aspects of the context it appears that charging for

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admission into a

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is unavoidable for the smooth functioning of

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.

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,

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practice has more merits than demerits. As long as the ticket prices are affordable,

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can enjoy them and

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can generate enough revenue.