Write a letter to your frind who lives in aqnother country and in your letter: a. Invite him to a public event in your country b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friennd when he will visit.

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Hi Jigar, It's been a long time since we met

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time before I left India 3 years ago. I still remember those days of our college life when we spent the best days of our life. I am writing to invite you to my

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party. As you know very well, I am going to graduate in the winter session. Our

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is going to take place on the 15th of January

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year. I want you to join my

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party. The

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will be held in the auditorium hall of the University of Guelph. All graduates from Fall and Winter sessions will be provided with their hard-earned degrees. It will be commenced between 10 am to 5 pm. The guest speaker of

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event is a member of Parliament Mr Richard Nickson. I have planned your whole trip to Canada. After the

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day, we will go for a 3-day trip to Alberta where we'll try our hands on adventurous sports like skiing and ice skating. Afterwards, we'll go for a long drive to Vancouver downtown and take a flight back to Toronto. To your surprise, I have already initiated your visa process on the Canada Immigration website. I want you to be part of

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important day of my life. I cannot wait to see you after a long time. See you soon, Raj

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Write a letter to your frind who lives in aqnother country and in your letter: a. Invite him to a public event in your country b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friennd when he will visit.

ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and magazines. Do you think it is a positive development?

Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth . However , some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

More and more people are forgetting the meanings behind occasions, such as national celebrations. What do you think are the causes of it? What solutions do you suggest?