Write a letter to your frind who lives in aqnother country and in your letter: a. Invite him to a public event in your country b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friennd when he will visit.

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Hi Jigar, It's been a long time since we met

last

time before I left India 3 years ago. I still remember those days of our college life when we spent the best days of our life. I am writing to invite you to my

convocation

party. As you know very well, I am going to graduate in the winter session. Our

convocation

is going to take place on the 15th of January

year. I want you to join my

Convocation

party. The

convocation

will be held in the auditorium hall of the University of Guelph. All graduates from Fall and Winter sessions will be provided with their hard-earned degrees. It will be commenced between 10 am to 5 pm. The guest speaker of

this

event is a member of Parliament Mr Richard Nickson. I have planned your whole trip to Canada. After the

convocation

day, we will go for a 3-day trip to Alberta where we'll try our hands on adventurous sports like skiing and ice skating. Afterwards, we'll go for a long drive to Vancouver downtown and take a flight back to Toronto. To your surprise, I have already initiated your visa process on the Canada Immigration website. I want you to be part of

this

important day of my life. I cannot wait to see you after a long time. See you soon, Raj

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8 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Write a letter to your frind who lives in aqnother country and in your letter: a. Invite him to a public event in your country b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friennd when he will visit.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Some cities have few control over design and construction on housing and office buildings. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people say that the technology advancement enables people to entertain at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Some people think that all lawbreakers should be taken into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives (for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion.