People nowadays tend to have children at an later/older ages. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
No one can deny that nowadays individuals tend to birth their children at very later ages
such
as after 30 years old. There are many disadvantages and Linking Words
few
advantages I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
Correct article usage
a few
To begin
with the disadvantages, The new generations will be very busy with their work and a huge factor of people will prefer to married after completing their graduation and it has a big gap in their married life. Linking Words
In other words
, In the past massive will be married after they finished Linking Words
college
Correct pronoun usage
their college
degree
and it has a good effect on their nations. Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
For example
, British news channels reveal headlines Linking Words
today's
technology is advancing day by day and many people will be work-hard for Correct word choice
that today's
their
good careers in future but it has forgotten to wed Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
their partners and it has Change preposition
apply
a
impact on their kindergarten growth. Change the article
an
Hence
, A late married will be not good for anyone and it destroys for newborn baby's health.
To commence with the advantages, good Linking Words
jobs
opportunities require high qualifications for well-paid work and every individual will Change the noun form
job
dreamof
a wealthy lifestyle. To explain, The later married will be born a Correct your spelling
dream of
dream
child
not strong and many physical and mental health problems will become in new kids. Use synonyms
For instance
, In Australian newspapers Linking Words
authority
will declare Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
a
good childbirth at Remove the article
apply
normal
age Add an article
a normal
such
as Linking Words
parents
age has 20 plus it has a good effect on their children's brain ability. Change noun form
parents'
parent's
Thus
, A powerful Linking Words
child
's brain will work for their guardian's personal and young-age activities.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
Although
a good career is important in life Linking Words
but
a well healthy Remove the conjunction
apply
child
will be beneficial for their community. Use synonyms
Moreover
, older ages married will be not successful in life because they do have not the strong power to make a Linking Words
child
.Use synonyms
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