People nowadays tend to have children at an later/older ages. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
No one can deny that nowadays individuals tend to birth their children at very later ages
such
as after 30 years old. There are many disadvantages and few
advantages I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
Correct article usage
a few
To begin
with the disadvantages, The new generations will be very busy with their work and a huge factor of people will prefer to married after completing their graduation and it has a big gap in their married life. In other words
, In the past massive will be married after they finished college
Correct pronoun usage
their college
degree
and it has a good effect on their nations. Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
For example
, British news channels reveal headlines today's
technology is advancing day by day and many people will be work-hard for Correct word choice
that today's
their
good careers in future but it has forgotten to wed Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
their partners and it has Change preposition
apply
a
impact on their kindergarten growth. Change the article
an
Hence
, A late married will be not good for anyone and it destroys for newborn baby's health.
To commence with the advantages, good jobs
opportunities require high qualifications for well-paid work and every individual will Change the noun form
job
dreamof
a wealthy lifestyle. To explain, The later married will be born a Correct your spelling
dream of
dream
child
not strong and many physical and mental health problems will become in new kids. For instance
, In Australian newspapers authority
will declare Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
a
good childbirth at Remove the article
apply
normal
age Add an article
a normal
such
as parents
age has 20 plus it has a good effect on their children's brain ability. Change noun form
parents'
parent's
Thus
, A powerful child
's brain will work for their guardian's personal and young-age activities.
In conclusion, Although
a good career is important in life but
a well healthy Remove the conjunction
apply
child
will be beneficial for their community. Moreover
, older ages married will be not successful in life because they do have not the strong power to make a child
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