Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training.others believe they should be free to work in another country if the wish.discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some educational system to train
people
argue that experts in different majors should have jobs in the country
where they are educated while
others say it is up to them to decide where they want to work .
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people
should be free to choose a country
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professionals
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country
and believe that it is not a big ask. for example
in my country
after graduation from college , if you want to immigrate you are obligated to serve in your country
for 4 years. On the other hand
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country
,it would be more beneficial and they can be more useful.some developed countries
can afford better jobs and instruments for high-level professionals
,unlike undeveloped countries
. professionals
can achieve higher salaries and improve their abilities better so it is reasonable to accept other country
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for example
as we observe nowadays some educated people
from Asia countries
are interested in moving to America to fully use their capability
and progress. In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
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professionals
in every field which they studied and used the country
's money sources,due to
better salaries and opportunities to improve and reach higher levels they should have the freedom to choose any area that they want to work in.Submitted by mahsa.98.karimi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite