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Should parents be obliged to immune their children against common childhood diseases? or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? What is your view of this practice?

#parents #children #childhood #diseases #individuals #right #immunise #practice
The issue of childhood immunisation has gained
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 of attention in the
last
 few years with
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increasing
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increasing
 voices advocating against it. The question of whether or not
parents
 should be able to choose to
vaccinate
 their
children
 or whether it should be made compulsory is a complex one.
This
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 will argue that
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despite
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despite
 the importance of individual
choice
, immunisation should be forced for the greater benefit of society.
Firstly
,
positive
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 effects of vaccination can be seen in all countries where it has
made
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 compulsory. It is because of mandatory vaccination that in the countries
such
 as
,
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 England, Australia and the United States
diseases
 like polio,
small pox
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have
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 been eradicated completely. If
parents
 were able to have a
choice
 not to
vaccinate
 their
children
, these societies would be still afflicted by these
diseases
. So, in the long run, immunising
children
 saves lives because it
control
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spread
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the spread
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 of preventable
diseases
protects
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and protects
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 the population. Despite the above, some people argue that it is unfair to
vaccinate
children
 because they are not old enough to make the
choice
 by themselves and is
therefore
 an
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infringement
infringment
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infringement
 on their human rights.
However
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 it is the role of
parents
 to make decisions related to their
children
's health. Most vaccines must be administered in childhood before it is too late. Once the
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disease
desease
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disease
 takes hold and spread, it could lead to
epidemic
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 in society which could lead to global or
notional
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national
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 disaster.
Therefore
parents
 must be obliged to
vaccinate
 their
children
.
Although
 I believe, people should have free will or
choice
, when it comes to the issue of immunising
children
, evidence has shown it is the best way to prevent
spread
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the spread
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 of
diseases
 and save lives. Ultimately, enforcing immunisation is
greater
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 overall
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decision
desision
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decision
 for humanity.
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