You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/ her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Kamal, I hope you are in good health. It's been ages since we met. Time flies and I could not keep in touch with you as I was quite busy in my life and now, I am writing

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letter to know that I am planning to apply to your city for my future studies. Actually, I would like to be enrolled in an institute that could provide a project management course. I am planning to start my studies within two months.

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, I need to search the colleges from

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week. Since I have finished my master's and my major was software engineering and currently, I want to pursue my study in management.

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subject would be a great help for me to complete my endeavours.

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, I would like your assistance to find me an institute, which will provide me with the best knowledge about my course.

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, if that college provides an internship, it would be incredible. I hope you are able to contact an education department for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards, Harwinder

HarinderFri Oct 07 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

186 words

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