Online education is beacoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages.

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Due to the pandemic, online education has gained

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of attention. Online

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have become so popular that many university students are choosing to study online rather than in

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studies. In my opinion, online education has significantly brought

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changes in the education system undoubtedly but the benefits cannot outweigh the disadvantages.

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have been beneficial for many students to study from home during the pandemic when there was a complete lockdown throughout many countries in the world. For an instance, many people had assessed through their mobile phones and laptops to complete their courses and become graduates when there were travel restrictions. Many international admission who could not travel

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completed their courses online from their home countries.

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the practical knowledge experience was missing still they could finish the course via the internet due to which a lot of students faced issues . Online

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have lots of requirements. We need Laptops, internet, power and no distraction room. It will be

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issue for many if any one of the resources has some issue. In major cities in India, we still face power outages

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and network issues.

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will lead to breaks in the class and recorded class videos will not have much impact. Fulfilling all the necessities for a smooth online class may not be practically possible in many parts of the world. In conclusion,

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online

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have made the study easier

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many people who cannot attend the campus. The physical teacher and student interaction in the campus classroom without distractions have a greater impact on the student's understanding of the subject taught. Practical knowledge

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helps to remember theoretical knowledge, which is not possible in online

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. So the advantages cannot overweigh the disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Distance learning
E-learning platforms
Virtual classrooms
Traditional education
Digital resources
Self-paced learning
Asynchronous learning
Blended learning
Technological infrastructure
Student engagement
Time management
Cost-effective
Geographical barriers
Networking opportunities
Face-to-face interaction

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Online education is beacoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages.

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and magazines. Do you think it is a positive development?

When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time,people would always choose not to work. do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with distruptive children in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most people do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?