you recently received an invitation to a three day training programe which should be benefit you and the company write a letter to you manager and say:- ask to attend the program decribe the program explain how the program will benefit the company write at least 150 words invitation day program taining manager attend program details and benefits

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Dear Sir, I am delighted to inform you that I have got an invitation for a three-day training course from the Toronto law enforcement and security agency. For

this

conference, I have taken a test and I have done excellent in the examination

that is

why I have been invited to attend a free three-day training program at the Toronto Convention centre from 15th October 2022 to 17th October 2022. In

this

,course extra training will be given on the " use of force and its application" as you know recently, there is an increase in criminal activities and shoplifting at shops in the downtown Toronto area.

this

program will provide many benefits like free licencing and training by police officers as I work as a supervisor for shopping mall security

furthermore

I can

also

provide training to my colleagues as well once I attend the training. I hope to hear from you because need three days off from my work during

this

time period . yours Sincerely, Aman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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