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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

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people
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 go to another country with their families for working, there are many pros and cons that stemmed from the results of
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 family development but will
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society.
Although
 there are various disadvantages,
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 of family development. One of the advantages of moving abroad with the individuals of a family is that it can provide people with less homesickness than moving alone. It can be a very stark period for someone to move abroad
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of
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 psychology. It is fact that most
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human
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 beings, without their families,
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life experiences might go through badly in many aspects.
For example
, my uncle Jack has gone to the USA to work at a museum, without his family. He has not endured the longing for his family.
Then
 he took them with him.
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 someone who moving abroad with
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 family from many psychological problems
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 fortifying family liaisons.
On the other hand
, there is a drawback is that it is likely to adapt to
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 society. Living abroad can be a taxing process owing to there
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 many substantial differences between cultures.
An academic
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 research conducted by the International Immigration Society
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 shown that people might not acclimate to other cultures
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 after certain
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. It is conspicuous that moving with family jointly to another country is hard
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 specific stipulations. To sum up, it is more beneficial that someone
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its
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 country with
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their family
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.
Hence
, there are many
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going
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 abroad without family. And the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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