A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter fo the company. tn your fetter describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter for sharing my thoughts on sponsoring a local children's sports
team for two years or paying for two open-air concerts by your prime firm. Firstly
, I would like to gratitude your management for taking such
a good initiative towards society. In addition
to that, it is appreciated to check for public feedback.
In my opinion, funding for a sports
team will be beneficial to many children who are interested in sports
and games. This
program can build many skilled sportsmen from our local community which gives them motivation and improve their skills.
On the other hand
, pumping money into a concert program will be good entertainment for our people in this
local region. Since many people have not gotten a chance to attend such
programmes in the past. Moreover
, many people from various cities might be visiting our place and come to know more about this
area.
However
, I think it will be more advantageous to sponsor sports
terms for the reason that this
will be a long-term program and will be an investment for our future generation. I hope you will consider our feedback and act accordingly
.
Yours faithfully,
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