Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discus both views and give your opinion.

Certain crowds think television has multi uses and one of them useful features is a source of education ,
however
,other populations are against
this
view,they think
TV
is used only date pass programmes only for
entertainment
.In my opinion,in
this
modern world
TV
is one of the best creations of technology.It gives positive results ,as well as negative all are in our own hands,what we want to get from it.In
this
,essay, I will discuss both views and try to clarify misunderstandings. There are several reasons behind using
tv
,the main reason is for getting education purpose.Everybody wants to know the current world situation,what going on near me or outside of my country all of them can get watching the news on
tv
.The main reason for buying a
TV
is for watching the news from the news we can get unlimited knowledge.Another reason very early children can teach the alphabet and language is through cartoons.Very small kids who did not start school can teach the alphabet and numbers through drama and cartoons on
tv
programmes,
moreover
,all schools started to teach by using the
TV
screen.
On the other hand
, the public are thinking
TV
was only can use for
entertainment
,some reasons strongly stand behind it,
firstly
, a comedy
show
makes man's mood cheap.Many
TV
channels make and
show
a variety of programmes for public
entertainment
like comedy shows, musicals
show
and
games
show
, which helps the public with refreshment after long work.
Secondly
,
TV
shows live international
games
,
furthermore
,many
TV
channels broadcast live tournaments like world cup football,cricket matches as well as the Olympic
games
,all of them get more
entertainment
for people who cray about
games
. In conclusion, Staying at home and watching
TV
all day is the main bad habit of the public.
TV
is the best invention of technology,
however
, people misused it and the blame goes to technology.We all are able to handle
tv
write way and getting knowledge unlimited.We can operate it as
entertainment
when we are tired and bored
also
it can use for learning and educational purposes.that all depend upon our ability and priority.
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