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the rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style . what are the advantages of this trend ? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#rise #convenience #foods #people #life #style #trend
these days,
instant
food
 getting popular among
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people
 . the constant increase in
instant
food
 has
fruitful
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 for the
people
 which contain the speed in luxury living style .
in
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this
 essay both give
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the benefit
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benefit
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benefits
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 and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 of
the
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this
 trend.
moreover
,there
more
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drawback
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drawbacks
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 than
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an advantage
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advantage
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firstly
, there
are
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 serval
drawback
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drawbacks
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 of having
instant
food
 . I would like to outline
drawback
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 behind it which is unhealthy because convenience
food
 Isn't healthy for the body while
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 having
such
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meal
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 in a day which doesn't contain
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protein . to illustrate, in America due to their busy schedule they use
instant
food
 on daily basis and 95 % public consume noodles and
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ready made
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food
 in their house
such
nuggets
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 and noodles as well as.
furthermore
, would like to add some more
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in
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such
 as
instant
food
 is
also
 expensive for
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people
 to consume. as
compare
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 to
the
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homemade
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home made
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food
instant
food
 is
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such
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 more
expense
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.
secondly
, I would love to highlight some useful thing which
instant
food
 provide in their living style
such
 as
instant
food
 take less time for cooking the
food
 but many
of
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people
 get helpful
by
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the
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instant
food
 because it
take
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 less and less time to cook the
food
 as
mention
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that
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this
 cook is
ready made
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 . a person just
have
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 to fry into it .
for example
,according to job
people
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 they give more preference to
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instant
food
 when they get back from their job so they can just cook it in the
second
 which is quite easy for them. addition, one more point in the advantages
such
 as easy to make
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instant
food
just
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 a minute. to sum up, increase in the number of
people
 who give preference to
the
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ready made
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food
 . as told there are more disadvantages rather than
having
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an advantage
the advantage
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advantage
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advantages
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