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Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sponsoring local
sports
 teams as a marketing
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strategy
stratergy
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strategy
 is a common practice used by
companies
 worldwide.
However
, there is a crucial discussion regarding the pros and cons of
this
 tactic used by different commercial organizations.
This
 essay will elucidate the pros and cons of
this
 phenomenon
,
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 and will explain why I think it is a positive
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occurrence
occurance
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occurrence
. There
are
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 a multitude of significant advantages for
players
 in acquiring financial
aids
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 from
companies
.
Firstly
,
sports
 that do not
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receive
recieve
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receive
 adequate funding from the government to ameliorate their performance can be supported with
this
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 measures;
thus
, facilitating them to enhance their quality of practice. There are many local
sports
 in Sri Lanka that are being sponsored by multinational
companies
 and
shown
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 improved outcomes.
Secondly
, when rural
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tournaments
tournements
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tournaments
 are funded by
such
 huge cooperations, it will ultimately, provide the rural
players
an
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upperhand
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upper hand
 to gain publicity and attention from the local national teams as well as, well-reputed
sports
 clubs. Many Sri Lankan cricketers have made the Sri Lankan team with
such
 opportunities.
Although
 company sponsorships are helpful, there can be negative
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repercussions
repurcussions
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repercussions
 to it.
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 hand, more pressure may be held upon the
players
 since they are holding the reputation of the company they are being sponsored
;
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therefore
, playing with a relaxed mental state will be challenging for them.
On the other hand
, these
players
 may unintentionally promote unhealthy merchandise to
the
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society which will mislead them, and they will not be able to prevent it based
of
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 legislative reasons. A most popular example
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this
 is a dispute between a popular football player and a global beverage brand questioning the healthiness of the brand on public media.
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In spite
Inspite
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In spite
 of all the
demerites
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demerits
demerit
 it possesses, I believe the merits of
companies
 sponsoring
sports
 cannot be neglected. When a multinational company funds a sport, they provide
an
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immense financial support for the team to buy necessary supplies
such
 as
sports
equipments
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equipment
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,
nutrition
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and nutrition
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supplement
supplements
suppliment
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supplements
.
Moreover
, they will execute plans to economically stabilize well-talented sportsmen in order to elevate their accomplishments which will
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eventually
evetually
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eventually
, guide
to
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 championships. In conclusion, it can be recapitulated that, despite the harmful impacts of letting financial organizations
to
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support
sports
, a substantial development in
sports
 can be witnessed with their support. Even so, according to my judgement, local authorities must
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implement
impliment
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implement
 certain legal restrictions to avoid unnecessary tension and influence given by these
companies
 on
players
.
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