In recent years, “responsible tourist” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism is
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of the sources of revenue for some countries. People all over the world may want to visit
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certain
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certain
locations ranging from the most well-known to the infamous. As a
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you do have a responsibility to maintain any site for the visit as it was.
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, some percentage of people do cause a mess at these
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sites. The influence of responsible tourists on culture and
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the environment
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the environment
will be discussed in the text below. To be responsible simply means to be accountable for
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's own actions.
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, prior to seeing a
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site, the individual
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an obligation to take into account the way of life of the people at the place he or she will be visiting as well well the overall environment. Different countries, towns and so on do have specified clothes or dress codes for the community members. As a person on tour, it is crucial to conform
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laws and orders.
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,
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has to ensure certain behaviours
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as littering is prohibited so as not to make the environment dirty. In nutshell, the
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should agree to all other things
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as no smoking, and no alcohol amongst others to ensure
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behaviours are not picked up by others who are living in a particular locality.
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, being humans from different places, we do have a way of life and personal preferences that define us irrespective of where we find ourselves. It is believed that each person would be him/herself and tour comfortably if there are no restrictions set for
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venues. To clarify
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, an individual would love to wear short and exposed outfits to an Arab country if there are no legislatures preventing that. All other characters shall be displayed by a
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without taking into consideration
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influence on the culture and the environment as well as future implications. To conclude,
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can be a responsible or irresponsible
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depending on what is considered before embarking on the journey. I
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strongly disagree
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the view that
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cannot be a responsible
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