People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness. Why is it? What are the best ways to reduce this problem?
Nowadays, travelling to another country is a very common trend. The reasons for travelling can be different
such
as study or work etc. Most people
have homesickness when they are outside or far away from their homes. This
happens because of a new place
, strange people
, and no friends or family at all. I will discuss it further
and present some points to overcome this
issue.
First of all, when someone moves to a new place
, it is very difficult to manage individually. For instance
, juveniles go abroad for studying
, and when they have to live alone without family, Change preposition
to study
then
it becomes the reason for their homesickness. Rephrase
apply
Moreover
, in a foreign country , there is nobody whom we know personally and hence
we are not able to share with anyone how we are feeling and no one especially has enough time to listen
our problems.
Second of all, when Add the preposition
listen to
people
go to a new place
, it is normal to have
sadness because they cannot understand where they have to go for their daily needs and Verb problem
feel
as a result
, they remember their family members such
as their parents. Additionally
, people
who transfer due to
their work have to suffer a lot as well. Workers in outside countries have to manage everything and they have to look after their family members back home, so it is obvious to have homesickness because they are not living with their family.
There are many ways to prevent this
issue. In the first place
, they should make new friends and should increase their friend circle so that they might feel good when they got
sad or upset. Wrong verb form
get
In addition
, it is a better idea to go outside in their leisure time so that they could be familiar with the new place
. Apart from
this
, add some activities in daily life such
as walking, and running , in this
way they will refresh their mind as well.
In conclusion, this
is very difficult to live without family, but people
have to make their life
better by adding some extra effort.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
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