People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness. Why is it? What are the best ways to reduce this problem?
Nowadays, travelling to another country is a very common trend. The reasons for travelling can be different
such
as study or work etc. Most Linking Words
people
have homesickness when they are outside or far away from their homes. Use synonyms
This
happens because of a new Linking Words
place
, strange Use synonyms
people
, and no friends or family at all. I will discuss it Use synonyms
further
and present some points to overcome Linking Words
this
issue.
First of all, when someone moves to a new Linking Words
place
, it is very difficult to manage individually. Use synonyms
For instance
, juveniles go abroad Linking Words
for studying
, and when they have to live alone without family, Change preposition
to study
Linking Words
then
it becomes the reason for their homesickness. Rephrase
apply
Moreover
, in a foreign country , there is nobody whom we know personally and Linking Words
hence
we are not able to share with anyone how we are feeling and no one especially has enough time to Linking Words
listen
our problems.
Second of all, when Add the preposition
listen to
people
go to a new Use synonyms
place
, it is normal to Use synonyms
have
sadness because they cannot understand where they have to go for their daily needs and Verb problem
feel
as a result
, they remember their family members Linking Words
such
as their parents. Linking Words
Additionally
, Linking Words
people
who transfer Use synonyms
due to
their work have to suffer a lot as well. Workers in outside countries have to manage everything and they have to look after their family members back home, so it is obvious to have homesickness because they are not living with their family.
There are many ways to prevent Linking Words
this
issue. In the first Linking Words
place
, they should make new friends and should increase their friend circle so that they might feel good when they Use synonyms
got
sad or upset. Wrong verb form
get
In addition
, it is a better idea to go outside in their leisure time so that they could be familiar with the new Linking Words
place
. Use synonyms
Apart from
Linking Words
this
, add some activities in daily life Linking Words
such
as walking, and running , in Linking Words
this
way they will refresh their mind as well.
In conclusion, Linking Words
this
is very difficult to live without family, but Linking Words
people
have to make their Use synonyms
life
better by adding some extra effort.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
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