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As languages such as English, Spansih and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

#languages #english #spansih #mandarin #fear #minority #countries #steps #practice #reason
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Many minority
languages
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 may die out because of the major
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such
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 as
English
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, Spanish or Mandarin which have been famous and most widely spoken. Measure by many
countries
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 has been adopted to help save the minor
languages
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 from getting extinct. I would discuss
this
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 in brief
further
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 with support and example of my own past experience.
Firstly
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, it is true that major outspoken
languages
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 like
English
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, Spanish and Mandarin have been very much adopted mainly due to the economical growth and huge business of the respective country.
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 to that, the above-mentioned
languages
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 have been so common in many
countries
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 that the native and local
languages
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 have been ignored.
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, in India,
Hindi
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 is the most spoken
language
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 which is
also
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 the country's local
language
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. My son who is 6 years old has never adopted our native
Hindi
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language
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instead
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 he speaks only
English
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 as most of the animation videos or most famous cartoon characters are broadcasted in
English
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.
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, we are forced to speak with him in
English
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 and my parents are unable to communicate with their grandchildren as they only know the regional
language
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.
This
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 indeed is a threat to our
language
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 and culture.
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, these major
languages
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 have started wiping out the regional music industry in a wider manner. Today we hear many regional songs mixed with
English
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 sentences which is a trend in the western region.
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, many rap singers in India mixed
Hindi
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 sentences with
English
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 and copy the style of western rappers.
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 to that Korean series have become so famous that in our country most watch with
English
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 subtitles by avoiding
Hindi
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 series which are far better than them.
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, in India, the Ministry of cultural activities has taken remedial measures by encouraging regional
languages
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 and imposing mandate rules of speaking regional
languages
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 in government offices, schools and hospitals which will surely add an advantage.
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, even it is essential to know the major
language
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. It is
also
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 equally important to respect our regional
language
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 which defines the culture and eases communication locally. Governments in some
countries
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 have taken measures as stated above to overcome the disappearance of the minor
language
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 from respective
countries
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.
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