1. You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should: – Describe the course you are taking. – Explain what you don’t like about the course. – Give your opinion about what should be done about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about a couple of problems which I am facing while
taking a course.
Last
month, I saw an advertisement about your institution that a course was going to be offered which is named "Marketing Strategies". Therefore
, I got
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this
subject because by profession I am a marketer and I am bad at developing strategies. Therefore
, I need to ramp up my marketing skills in that area.
However
, the outline of the subject defines that it is an effective one but actually
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Firstly
, the teacher is completely focused on theoretical concepts rather than dispatching us on market surveys to grab hands-on experience. Moreover
, the lectures are not organized in an adequate manner. As a result
, the whole class is facing tribulation to comprehend
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in comprehending
overall
knowledge and learning of the subject. Finally
, there is no facility for multimedia in the class. Consequently
, sometimes it becomes quite harder for the tutor to make our concepts clear.
Therefore
, you are requested to take some necessary actions to improve the quality of the course by tweaking its outline and some of its topics too
, installing a project in the classroom and increasing the number of actual market visits.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Arsalan FarooqRephrase
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task response
Add more specific examples to support your complaints about the course.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for a letter to the director of an evening school.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite