In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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and the roles within

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changed. Due to the paced developments in

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technology, almost every family members learn

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staff and implement to their lives regardless of positions they have in

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substitutions may bring some obstacles . In my opinion, alteration in

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depends on some reasons and it

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both positive and negative influences. As regards offsprings, cutting-edge technology that

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used by the youth create changes in their behaviours. Every

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the internet which has to be learned mostly from

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or grandfather.

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could be done by themselves without any support.

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of undesirable circumstances happen.

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internal management within the family. Children from infancy are being fostered

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listening to the stories about relationships inside or

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of the family roots and when needed, they are being aware of what deeds have to be done

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to run the family

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an inherited way. In conclusion, it was experienced that the structures and roles have been altered in families, and I believe that it has positive and negative sides, simultaneously.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Family structure
Modern family
Extended family
Nuclear family
Same-sex parent families
Breadwinner
Caregiving responsibilities
Family dynamics
Globalization
Economic shifts
Migration
Child-free lifestyles
Cohabitation
Traditional marriage
Perceptions
Homemaker
Communication
Shared activities

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